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She can't stop looking at his wrist. Wrapped around that glass, there are marks cutting up and down like the patterns on a map. Can I touch it, and his hand tightens on the glass. That's when she realises she spoke out loud. I think I should leave. No please don't. I just had a horrible day and I really need to be with someone.
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Award this author for a very awesome unexpected radical change in the expected direction.