julesberry inspired :
As I see now, Nadia developped a better environment for herself, as an individual.
But what happens to her collective events, feelings, interests?
I think it'd be interesting to create a conflict between indivudiality and collectiveness.
And showing her struggle to find the answer that actually is the healthier and most authentic to herself.
Great Kickoff ^^
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