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The kid and two men

The kid and two men

The Kid and Two Men
I peeked through the curtains. There was a limo parked outside with two bodyguards. I heard a knock at the door. I ran into my moms room, into her closet and sat right inside the clothes that were as soft as my dog. I sat there for five minutes, no noises. I was hoping that I could wait till my mom gets home. Just when I thought everything was fine I heard the front door. It was getting broken down. I hear at least two men talking back and forth to each other. I know that it was a limo outside, but something gave me a feeling that something was up outside of my house and something is up. I hear them speaking but can’t hear what they are saying. Then, I start to hear these two men start to head towards the room that I am placed in. I try to get as deep as possible in my moms blob of clothes.
“Where is that boy,” the man says.
“We have to keep looking,” the other man says back.
They men keep getting even more closer second by second. I have a funny feeling coming from
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inside my head. It's a sneeze this could help them find me. Right when the sneeze is about to come I hold my breath and hold it in. This could have been the reason why I would have been caught and captured or even killed. The men go downstairs I am relieved that I was very quiet and nobody could hear me. The men carefully try to sneak out of the house when I thought they were going to get away
a man screams “puts your hands up,”.
It was so loud I could hear it all the way from inside the closet.
Then the thieves scream “ Not today.”
A big blast came from right near the front door I heard a man scream in pain. I also hear two men run out of the house. Ten seconds later two car doors close and the car drives away. I don’t know what the two men looked like and why they wanted to come to my house so badly. I later come out of the closet thinking that it is safe, grab a phone and slowly start to move back into the closet. My mom was at work and my dad was also at work. I am an only child
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so I figure things out on my own. First, I dial 911 and wait for them to pickup.
“Nine one one whats your emergency?,” the operator says
“ two men broke into my house and seems like they shot an officer,” I whisper into the phone.
“ I am sending six cops over to your home. What is your Address?,” the operator says
“ 24 oak street,” I whisper back.
Then I call my mom…
“Hey sweetie,” my mom says.
“Hi Mom, two men broke into our house.” I said with a very frightened tone.
“ Are you okay, I need to call 911, this is not good oh my god,” She says with an alarming voice.
The police arrive and so does my mom at the same time. They both see nothing. No dead man nothing.
I wake up with a dream. Could it be all a dream, I pinch myself to see if I am dreaming it hurt so I guess im not.
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